Honeycakes_Finale_rough_sketch

Honeycakes submissission reaches its finale— a crude, rough sketch.

THIS IS NOT AT ALL SOPHISTICATED— VERY CRUDE AND ALSO VERY CRUEL (WRITTEN A LONG TIME AGO). One day, I’m sitting in the partner’s meeting, and they get to ‘any other business’, and D says; ‘Oh yea, I had an idea. I wanna get the pussy pierced and branded— mark her up nice— identify our property. Some guy over KKL showed me his piece , a little blonde— looked nice, and it had a good effect on her attitude, he said.’ [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 5 minutes; 1100 words

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Delicious Whore (Pt.4 deprecated - a dead-end)

Soon to be deleted.

This chapter is deprecated. It goes too far, too fast. It is here only as a record of failure. It will be deleted once a rewrite is complete. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 24 minutes; 5000 words

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Capitulation, Pt1

Her wonderful boyfriend makes a crushing birthday request.

We’d been going out for three years, and moved in together after only a few months, so happy we were to have found each other. I was really happy to come home every day, and it seemed he was too. My friends thought he was lovely—the perfect gentleman—my parents liked him too. We had a great sex life, and enjoyed each other’s company, although we also had our own friends— my girlfriends, his mates. We had discussed kids, and we agreed there, too—no way!—not for a few years anyway… [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 49 minutes; 10400 words

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Moving Her On Pt2—Later that Morning

The next day, the impact on her psyche is ruthlessly reinforced.

Now here she is—possessed indeed by him, folded into his life so deeply that she cannot even imagine trying to leave. Having discovered through shocking, shameful violation just what he wants from his possession of her, how absolute, how heartless that possession will be, that no matter whether she has been betrayed, tricked, abused (as no doubt her friends would describe the situation—and in truth, how she would describe the same circumstances applied to any of them), she has been changed, deeply reconfigured, that he has indeed successfully ‘moved her on’. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 42 minutes; 9000 words

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The Trio—Cello Pt4.

His intention to hold himself in check is impossible to hold to as she surprises him with how helplessly she responds to cruel treatment. TRIGGER WARNING—Knifeplay.

He had been going to take it gradually—he really had—but she … she has been so … so helplessly inviting, at every stage, that now he won’t stop. He has ceased to be able to plan. She is here, hot, open, offering herself, so soft, so compliant, so eager, that he’s just going to do her, ravage her, get rid of this thing that is like rage inside him that requires wildness to be released, and not bottle it up any more. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 45 minutes; 9500 words

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Capitulation, Pt 2

Mia and Maddy, before and after the violation.

Many, many things that had seemed important now seem meaningless to Mia. Almost nothing has turned out to matter at all, and of those few that do, most have been violently and callously stripped from her. She has been changed, irrevocably. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 22 minutes; 4700 words

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The Story of S Pt10.

His game is played, and Essy is indeed utterly undone by the terrible orgasm which overwhelms her.

This is hard for you, I know. Of course, it is meant to be; but still, you are suffering, allowing me to damage you; do not imagine that I do not understand how you are working for me, and how much it is costing you. It may help to know that I am enjoying you immensely; that you are responding very gratifyingly. I am having to control myself, too; I am strongly tempted to forget the orgasm and rape you right now; you are so delightfully vulnerable and ready for it. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 25 minutes; 5300 words

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The Story of S Pt13.

Mark imposes a terrible warning.

It took forever; time stood still; she wailed, broken, lost, ruined, the whole time, not even in direct response to what was being done to her; that violence, that pain, that shame was only the surface of what he was doing to her, which was taking everything, degrading everything, removing everything from her; utterly devastating. [Read More]

Estimated reading time: 7 minutes; 1300 words

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